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An Unwanted Black Heart for You..!


An Unwanted Black Heart For You..!
You made my life living hell..
That made me insecure and unwell,
You made me cry..
You made me hurt,
You made me despotic,
But still I Love you with all my heart,
But my heart is indignant to you,
Because of you;
It lost it's spark ,
Because of you;
It burned in flames without claims,
It was dreamy, But now it's dreary,
It was lovable ; but
Now it's hatred.
It was red , But now it's BLACK..!!!
Because of you...!
An Unwanted Black Heart for You..!

12 comments so far..What are your thoughts?

  1. its pain and only pain of the blood that has gone blue......very demanding when restricted to its natural flow.

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  2. @Fantacy In practicality
    Oh yes! And now it's hatred and unforgiving too !!

    Thanks for the view :)

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  3. No one person can do this,and certainly no one is worth it..but well written and it hurts...

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  4. @Alpana
    My feelings just came out in my words.It hurt within so deep!

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  5. It's your feelings from deep within...If you love someone then you are already taking the chance to gain pain....pain is a part of Love.yes it hurts but we should keep moving with time.Well written poem.

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  6. @Abhishek
    Yeah I am moving ahead but these writing gives me strength ..So, I reflect all about in my writing :)

    Thank You :)

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  7. What a sad and dark poem Simran and from one so young. Beautiful.

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  8. Simran, you are a wonderful poetess...loved your dark poem.

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  9. @Rimly
    Glad that you liked it :)

    @Sulekkha
    You made my day Sulekkha :)

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  10. oh little one... it sounds familiar :P...a kashmiri doctor called me a black heart :P... geez...

    oh the feeling is so intense... it reminds me of some "cloudy" days...

    i like the use of punctuations that contributes to the intensity of the poem... it shows character and strength... i like the way you hurled the words to the person you were referring to...

    it makes me laud you more because you're very creative... i always ask you if you've experienced such things...wow!

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  11. oh little one... it sounds familiar :P...a kashmiri doctor called me a black heart :P... geez...

    oh the feeling is so intense... it reminds me of some "cloudy" days...

    i like the use of punctuations that contributes to the intensity of the poem... it shows character and strength... i like the way you hurled the words to the person you were referring to...

    it makes me laud you more because you're very creative... i always ask you if you've experienced such things...wow!

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  12. @Melissa
    My sweet friend :)
    I haven't went through such circumtances but I have seen someone's pain and I can understand how much it hurts,sucks and kill within!!
    I always try to reflect my feelings through my poems whatever I feel whatever I think I just penned down..I think it's the best way of expressing :)
    Glad that my writing helps you to remind of before.
    I have a great affection and attachment with you..I think you understand my feelings .So, I feel nice to have your views..

    Thank You :)
    Take care

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