The fading Good-bye

1.3.11 | Post by Anirban Saha

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The soul wishes for a tryst with you,

you and me together far away in solitude.

Solitude and Silence shouts Schmaltzy.

The arrow struck the moon shattering it into pieces,

that falls on earth as glittering remains of romanticism.

Am collecting its pieces,

memory lane sheds a drop of tear.

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10 comments so far..What are your thoughts?

Alpana JaiswalMarch 01, 2011 1:13 AM
very creative thinking...
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AbhisekMarch 01, 2011 1:15 AM
Anirban you surprise me everytime with your writing....creative as Alpana said :D
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KritiMarch 01, 2011 1:18 AM
Awesome : )
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MayukhMarch 01, 2011 1:50 AM
Its a good one this.
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UnknownMarch 01, 2011 2:26 AM
nice concept dear...............
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sulekkhaMarch 01, 2011 2:51 PM
Beautiful poem...
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Prosenjeet PaulMarch 01, 2011 6:19 PM
Have read these lines before...you have just arranged them now in the form of a poem ..as I had said earlier "Nice"
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Some one you might knowMarch 02, 2011 3:17 PM
As much as I loved this poignant little piece, I am afraid it is a little too bitter to be sweet. But leaves a taste all the same.
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AdilMarch 03, 2011 11:58 PM
Hats off 2 u bro,ur amazng...hats off 2 ur pennmanshp...may allah bless u..
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Prateek's blogMarch 04, 2011 2:40 AM
Nothing to say dada! You are just awesome.. And I wish everything gonna be fine soon.. :) and I believe it will be..
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