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Waiting…..

2.3.11 | Post by Rimly

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She stands gazing into the distant horizon

Waiting….for a glimpse.

The lashing winds from faraway lands

Murmurs to her of a love

That brings a smile to her hungry lips.

Every line etched on her face

Has a story to tell….

Tales of adventure and misadventure

Of pain and longing

Of joy and happiness

Of agony and ecstasy.

She shivers as darkness gathers around her

Remembering ….the warmth

Of that first embrace.

Arms that had engulfed her

With her sorrows, woes and tragedies.

A lost soul, floundering

In the maze of her life

Till he showed her….

A life of love laden days

Of respect and dignity

Of promise and trust.

She listens to the rustle of falling leaves

Mocking and cackling at her

Waiting…..eternally for a promise

Given in a moment of tenderness.

Her dark luminous eyes are pools of dying embers

Hiding in their depths her buried desires and passion.

An unfaltering silhouette,

A sentry of timelessness

She waits….for him.

Months, seasons, years roll into decades…

Yet, for her the hands of time stand still,

Mourning and yet pregnant with hope

She waits…..her endless vigil.

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17 comments so far..What are your thoughts?

UnknownMarch 02, 2011 1:03 PM
I like your posts! Really!
>.<

<3lots,
Faye
http://fayelovesfashion.blogspot.com/
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Alpana JaiswalMarch 02, 2011 1:16 PM
Rimly..wish I could just steal every post of your forever..
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alejandro guzmanMarch 02, 2011 1:34 PM
beautifully sorrowful.

Cheers A
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Sumit ChakrabortyMarch 02, 2011 1:35 PM
@Rimly
I dunno why, but i love these lines particularly "She listens to the rustle of falling leaves
Mocking and cackling at her
Waiting…..eternally for a promise
Given in a moment of tenderness."
Lovely one :)
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ShebaMarch 02, 2011 1:37 PM
Very deep... Rimly. Every word told a story (familiar and yet far)!!!
Thank u...
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Jorie PacliMarch 02, 2011 1:42 PM
Beautifully written.... full of hope and longing...months, years, seasons, roll into decades... Ahh, love!
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SimranMarch 02, 2011 1:58 PM
Loved it!
Very touching post.
Thanks for sharing!
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abhinav singhMarch 02, 2011 1:58 PM
nice post..
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Rigzin NamgyalMarch 02, 2011 2:47 PM
..wonderful piece of poetry..
..keep it up.. :)
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sulekkhaMarch 02, 2011 4:36 PM
A very moving, sad poem about love and the agonizing waiting. Great post, Rimly,loved it.
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SwatiMarch 02, 2011 9:25 PM
Your posts make my heart ache with its beauty!!
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KritiMarch 02, 2011 10:20 PM
beautifully melancholic!
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RimlyMarch 02, 2011 10:51 PM
Thank you everyone for your comments. It means a lot to me.
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JIMMarch 02, 2011 10:59 PM
I always enjoy your poems and I am always moved.. Great story telling with beautiful words.
http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/03/my-recommended-blog-of-week-dereks-home.html
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RimlyMarch 03, 2011 12:03 AM
Thank you Jim. It means a lot to me.
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AbhisekMarch 03, 2011 12:54 AM
Beautiful Poem.....Loved every line :D
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DebraMarch 03, 2011 1:06 AM
Bittersweet.
Love poems must be your forte.
Have just discovered you Rimly -
and following.

Joy and peace~
~ Debra

http://debrasblogpureandsimple.blogspot.com
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