Insatiable
Moonlight crawls
Silence chills
Loneliness soars
Love invades
the soul.
Two souls
meet, caress
Fire burns
Kiss lingers
Takes you in
Take it slow
He sees you
She sees you
Falls deep
inside of you
Mind adrift
Sweet embrace
Bathes her skin
Heart's racing
Goes deeper
Insatiable
Candle flame
Slowly ceases
He reaches you
She reaches you
Love untangles
Triumphs, rejoices
Kiss...
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Think about it, there must be higher love
ReplyDeleteDown in the heart or hidden in the stars above
Without it, life is a wasted time
Look inside your heart, I'll look inside mine.
~ by Steve Winwood
Welcome to WE HAVE A STORY,Jorie,Abhisek and I are really happy to have to here with us,and your post proves it all..beautiful,touching...and you know..I love romance..
wow... love it jorie :P... "insatiable" reminds me of .... :P...
ReplyDeleteThank you Alpana.... I've been wanting to find a platform where I can express the other side of me.... So I would like to thank the admins of We Have A Story for giving me this opportunity.... It means a lot. Thanks to you too Alpana for bringing me here....XOX
ReplyDelete@Melissa: Yeah that song.... I was inspired by that song.... Thanks Melissa.:)xo
ReplyDeleteWOW I really forgot what passion and love was .... thanks for the visual.....As always...XOXOXO
ReplyDeleteThe hunger for love is much more difficult to remove than the hunger for bread. ~Mother Teresa
ReplyDeleteIt's insatiable!
“I am like a falling star who has finally found her place next to another in a lovely constellation, where we will sparkle in the heavens forever.”
Nice start Jorie....loved it :D
ReplyDeletesuperb write jorie...simply loved it...very beautiful...touching...n loved the pic...so apt...i loved the way u said so much wid such few words...n welcome to we have a story..:)
ReplyDeleteWow Jorie! That is beautiful and straight to the heart strings:) Your choice of words and placement truly emphasize what most of us forget about love. Thank you for sharing:)
ReplyDeleteIt is wonderful that some one as talented as you is given a platform to express themselves. You were you did and is was fantastic
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Well done Jorie! The words pull at the heart strings!
ReplyDeleteI could fall in love again after reading this! Only thing missing is the guy!
ReplyDeleteKiss and sweet
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Ooh! Very sensuous! A poet at heart yourself! : ))
ReplyDeletebeautiful soul, beautiful you, beautiful dream...........cherished each part of the poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Jorie I loved it :)
ReplyDeleteJessica
Beautiful poem, Jorie! Very passionate!
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful Jorie. Love is indeed insatiable.
ReplyDeleteThank you for all the wonderful compliments....:) You made it even more beautiful with your words..... and that background song really falls me deep into love right now...ahhhhh Love what have you done to our poor souls? Love you all guys...:) Cheers as always!:))
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