hmmm... makes me curious who this special friend is jorie :P...

i could actually feel how you truly miss this person... you've written it in words that could easily be understood...

one hour...

a friend once sent me a message, "if someone loves you, there is actually no need to ask nor beg for something you like or want to happen... because...when a person loves you, he/she would perfectly learn what makes you happy"... and spending time... being fully present is the best way ;)...

i wish you the best... ;)

Ummmmm... Melissa, shall we make this into a song? The last five lines will be the chorus part...lol

You are right there's no need to beg whatsoever... but I'm just honestly expressing what I'm feeling right now. I'm really missing someone and there's no better way to express that but through a poem. If only I could turn this into a song, it'll be even better..:) Thanks for your comment.:)xox

i think that's a very good idea jorie ;)... a jazz singer once asked me if i could compose songs for him in his new album... i don't know how :P... you have a gift and you should use that...

i know how you feel, the intensity may differ but yes, i do understand... ;)... stay with the feeling right now :P...

Thanks Melissa....:)xox

So much feeling here! Lovely and well written.

Jorie you have expressed your longing beautifully. I can understand exactly how you must be feeling. Whoever this special person is I hope you meet him soon and I hope he never breaks your heart

Full of feelings......Nicely expressed Jorie :D

soooooooooooooooooo nice.................not a kind of poet myself but it makes me try writing one when i get to read such poems......its so beautiful..:)

Interesting one. Short and sweet. :)