ANGEL ON EARTH..
Have you ever seen,
an angel on earth????
who mesmerizes the world with her oceanic eyes??
shes cute and sweet as ever!!!!
i have seen an angel on earth its you...
Have you ever seen,
an angel on earth????
who sheds tears for others' pains?
shows you the way when you turn insane..
comforts you when you are in need..
she is lovable as a teddy!
i have seen an angel on earth its you...
Have you ever seen,
an angel on earth????
spreading ripples of happiness around her,,
she is as gentle as dove,
i have seen an angel on earth its you...
Have you ever seen,
an angel on earth???
like the dew that are shaken,
from the wings that are waken..
happiness comes down her wings to enchant the world.
i have seen an angel on earth its you...
Have you ever seen,
an angel on earth???
who gives you a hug when you're low..
cheers you up, when you say the world a big NO!
i have seen an angel on earth;
wanna know who's she?
she is the one; my best friend..
........: is the angel's name :)
-Sumit.
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You are lucky to have seen an angel, and I loved her name,......
ReplyDeletegreat writing.
@Sulekha :D :D Thanks. As i said, She's an angel :D so her info shud be kept hidden :D
ReplyDeleteWelcome to WE HAVE A STORY...its a pleasure to have you with us,and you are great.I love your style..and anything related to romance,love...my favourite...keep up your exquisite work..will look forward to more.
ReplyDeleteAnd Sumit..I envy your "Angel"...
ReplyDelete@Alpana Thank you so much, I owe this opportunity to Mr.Anirban Saha (da)and of course the Admin :)
ReplyDeleteI'll try my best too keep up posting the best i can do.Hope i never let you guys down.
And hahaha, why envy her? She is such an innocent creature :)
I love your post. Wow.
ReplyDeleteYour angel must be a lucky one to have you. :)
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@Fayerydust :) Thanks a lot, i guess i am the lucky one too :)
ReplyDeleteLucky Angel..I must say :) :)
ReplyDelete@Jenny Really?? :P
ReplyDeletethe first thing i noticed is... 15 FB likes!
ReplyDeletecongratulations for that...
the 2nd thing that I noticed is.. you are the fourth writer from our college... well congrats to us and to the entire "We have a story" team..
the third thing that was worth noticing, was your style of writing - iterative, eloquent.. few lines will stay in my mind even if i dont wish to!
I am a kid, I cannot say whether this is good writing or bad, but this is definitely influential writing...
keep it up bro!
loved these lines> "like the dew that are shaken,
from the wings that are waken.."
@Anirban da :) Thanks for all the inspiring words, i guess it would get few more likes if we post it on our pages. Like i have done on all the pages. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks to you for giving me an opportunity. Thanks to the whole "We have a story" team, for such a warm welcome. i hope i can live up to your expectations.
I have posted it to my wall ;) cheakao!
ReplyDelete@Anirban da :) thnx
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem Sumit....seems like you really got an Angel...Welcome to We Have A Story family. :D
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem. You are so talented. I wish I had the ability to write poems.
ReplyDeleteXoxo
Jessica
@Abhishek da Thanks a lot, for giving me this opportunity. i guess i m the youngest writer here... am i not? really feels great :D :)
ReplyDelete@jessica
ReplyDeleteThank a lot for the lovely comment :) i guess i am not THAT good either :)
Always, ALways enjoy your post.. you have a great way of communicating your feelings. Taking words and making us see imageshttp://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/03/arizona-memories-every-now-and-then.html
ReplyDelete@Jim Thanks Jim :) You're blog is awesome too. I am a fan of your photography :)
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