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I lay serenely in the afterglow
The sweat of passion spent
Our bodies entangled
Lust expelled
Desires fulfilled
As our bodies rest
To come down from passions high


My hair tousled, my faced flushed
The red glow on my cheeks still visible
My eyes half shut, my mouth open slightly
My full lips still moist, my skin glowing with dampness 
No hint remains of what passed
The contortions of passion
Which were etched into my face
Linger no more, but shall again soon



In the half darkness we look at each other
My head rests on your shoulder
As I drown myself with your scent 
You nuzzle me in closer 
Soft moans and sighs
Escape my quivering lips
As your fingers run through my hair



I smile, take your fingers to my lips
To love every inch of you
To loose myself in your eyes again
Your fingers lightly brush over my body
Feeling my every curve
Feeling my body quiver under your touch
Your mouth meets with mine in a kiss
Our tongues finding one another

Probing, feeling and exploring
Your voice whispers in my ear
Making my body tingle all over
I feel myself surrendering
You gaze deeply into my eyes
And I gaze right back at you, smiling
Knowing what I want so badly...YOU


You read my mind so well
And without a single spoken word
We are making sweet love all night long
Our bodies intertwining together
To set me on fire
To quench the fire in my blood
With sweet caresses
To touch my soul with passion 
To get lost in each other
Touching, tasting, exploring


We will exceed passion, go beyond bliss
Making love to me
My body and my soul
Laid bare for you to mould
Reaching heights untold
I want you like no other
Need you, like the air I breathe
Together, one mind, one soul
Fused in the heat of passionate love
Existing in this moment


You reach out to stroke my cheek
With a soft and gentle touch
You whisper quietly into the night
Saying never have you loved so much
Gently I reach up to stroke your cheek
With a soft and gentle touch
Quietly into the night I whisper
"Never have I loved so much."












Alpana Jaiswal
Copyright@Motifs2011
Labels: Passion, glow, soul, fire
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74 comments so far..What are your thoughts?

  1. AbhisekMarch 26, 2011 11:02 PM

    Enjoyed reading it Alpana....this one is so full of passion and Love.Magical poetry :D

    I don't want to live - I want to love first, and live incidentally

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  2. Alpana JaiswalMarch 26, 2011 11:11 PM

    Thank you Abhi...

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  3. SimranMarch 26, 2011 11:21 PM

    A real touch of romance I would say..
    Beautifully explored :)
    As I am a great admirer of yours..love whatever you write :)

    Keep Writing because your writing reflects emotions sweetly :)

    Take care
    Love you..

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  4. fantasy in practicalityMarch 26, 2011 11:23 PM

    bold and beautiful, lust is bond binded by love........loved the excitation of the poem....Alpana, you are really a beauty at heart and in mind.

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  5. Alpana JaiswalMarch 26, 2011 11:32 PM

    @Simran..Thank you so much,I am honored..love u too.
    @Sancheeta..When I get appreciated for my work,it really feels great..thank you so much.

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  6. RahulMarch 26, 2011 11:52 PM

    Sensuous,mind blowing..you are great..

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  7. HansikaMarch 27, 2011 12:30 AM

    What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.
    ~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~
    Alpu Mausi..lyrics can made out of this..amazing..

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  8. KushagraMarch 27, 2011 12:37 AM

    THE BEST...NO ONE CAN DO THIS..YOU ROCK

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  9. AnanditaMarch 27, 2011 1:29 AM

    “Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one.”
    beautiful...

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  10. Melissa TandocMarch 27, 2011 5:10 AM

    i felt every word run through my imagination alpana :P... i know it'll create magical effects on my love as well :P... geez... thanks for this awesome poetry ;)

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  11. Jorie PacliMarch 27, 2011 6:33 AM

    Passion, romance and your words just put them into pictures in my imaginations...ahhhh... the afterglow...:)

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  12. sulekkhaMarch 27, 2011 7:25 AM

    "Passion is universal humanity. Without it religion, history, romance and art would be useless. ~Honoré de Balzac", loved your passionate poem Alpana. The afterglow is lovely.

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  13. JennysbusMarch 27, 2011 8:25 AM

    raunchy stuff

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  14. ArjunMarch 27, 2011 9:11 AM

    Alpana this so beautiful,and very very sensual...

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  15. Bachha HatiMarch 27, 2011 9:13 AM

    Please explain : "We will exceed passion, go beyond bliss"

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  16. JennysbusMarch 27, 2011 11:05 AM

    so after your hot steamy sex. try some of my luscious recipes.
    http://hubpages.com/hub/A-NEW-YUMMY-LIGHT-AND-LUSCIOUS-LEMON-DELICIOUS-PUDDING-RECIPE

    http://hubpages.com/hub/HOW-TO-MAKE-AN-EASY-RICH-CHOCOLATE-MOUSSE-RECIPE

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  17. Alpana JaiswalMarch 27, 2011 11:12 AM

    @Bachha Hati...first of all you should be able to feel it..or maybe experience it...seriously,can't put it in words...

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  18. N JMarch 27, 2011 11:29 AM

    Beautiful piece of work! Very sharp and focused! One of your best poems. Hope to read more of them from you. Keep penning such bold and brilliant poetry.

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  19. alejandro guzmanMarch 27, 2011 11:35 AM

    Passionate and erotic. Two things I can relate to. Now the Love thing has me stumped.

    A

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  20. Edmond DsouzaMarch 27, 2011 2:56 PM

    Great passion!!!!keep it up..............

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  21. sarda rokaMarch 27, 2011 6:27 PM

    so beautiful, so wonderful, alpana i loved it..

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  22. FionaMarch 27, 2011 6:46 PM

    Unbelievable,romantic,sensual...I can go on and on...you are so good with your words,I am so happy that you have finally found a way to show your emotions.

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  23. SamirMarch 27, 2011 7:07 PM

    Every achievement, big or small, begins in your mind...and I am so happy that is has started with yours..YOUR BEST POST UP TILL NOW...

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  24. VishalMarch 27, 2011 8:27 PM

    WOW.........THIS IS AMAZING....

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  25. Sancheeta BiswasMarch 27, 2011 8:37 PM

    love is beautified by the expressions of two earthy bodies intertwined with lust. its divine when two souls diffuse into one. you flowered the budding of two loving bodies in such a heavenly way. i just glided.

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  26. Preetu DaveMarch 27, 2011 10:18 PM

    Exquisite .... Powerful ... Passionate and Absolutely Captivating. Alpi - Your Master Stroke at work again. Brilliant....loved it to the core.

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  27. Preetu DaveMarch 27, 2011 10:20 PM

    That is exquisitely HOT & passionate...wow !!!!!!!!!!! ;)

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  28. Pramilla KarnardMarch 27, 2011 10:48 PM

    Brilliant as usual...

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  29. Panther GOODYMarch 27, 2011 11:16 PM

    Very nice! Someone must have lit your fire...lol. I liked it; it was very tastefully descriptive. I will be back.

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  30. RashmiMarch 28, 2011 12:00 AM

    You have been made to write..this is magical,music...and you are also made to be loved and looked after...love you always.

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  31. Abhinaba DeyMarch 28, 2011 1:47 AM

    best of luck... :)

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  32. Reshmi ChateerjeeMarch 28, 2011 1:48 AM

    Keep it always glowing n growing sweetie;God bless!

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  33. NamrataMarch 28, 2011 10:52 AM

    You are at your best now,beyond this...I can't even imagine....beautiful...

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  34. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 10:56 AM

    @Rahul...Thank you,for always reading my posts..and giving me support.
    @An Admirer...Thank you.
    @Hansika..I was scared you will not like this..thank you sweetheart.
    @Kushagra..Thank you..love u.

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  35. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 11:00 AM

    @Anindita...Thanks a lot,my friend..
    @Melissa..Thank you,I just can't wait to see you...I hope my posts continue to bring you happiness.
    @Jorie...Thank you.
    @Sulekha...I am always learning from you and Rimly...hope to do better,thanks a lot.

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  36. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 11:05 AM

    @JennyBus...Raunchy...Yes...thanks for all the support.
    @Arjun...Thanks a lot.
    @JennyBus..The next one will be just for you...involving chocolates,and what a great aphrodisiac it can be...
    @N J...Thank you..I get inspired by you,and you know that..I wish that someday,I will be able to write like you.

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  37. SumanMarch 28, 2011 11:06 AM

    Oooofff Alpu!!! Tooo good..too good..toooo goood!! Alpu u write so well..therez so much passion in u..only somebody didn't understand that..just hate him for that.
    Love u..keep writing more

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  38. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 11:07 AM

    AG...Thanks a lot..your comments mean a lot to me.
    @Edmond...Thank you.
    @Sarda...Thanks a lot,sweetheart..for always being bu my side.
    @Fiona...Thank you.

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  39. Suman RoyMarch 28, 2011 11:16 AM

    Oooofff Alpu!!! Tooo good..too good..toooo goood!! Love u..keep writing more

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  40. DeepikaMarch 28, 2011 1:33 PM

    I have always loved your style of writing,and this is too good,wish you the very best always.

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  41. Souvick MazumderMarch 28, 2011 2:26 PM

    By your words, you converted 'sex' into 'love making'. 'Wildness' into 'romance'.

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  42. Sanjib DasMarch 28, 2011 3:10 PM

    gud 1....all the best...Alpana

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  43. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 3:17 PM

    @Samir...Thank u.
    @Vishal...Thanks a lot...
    @Sancheeta...Thank u for understanding my work..will write something exclusively for you,sometime soon.
    @Preetu...Love u a lot...and thank u.

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  44. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 3:23 PM

    @Pramilladi...Your every word counts a lot because you must know,as to how much I look up to you.
    @Ricky...Thanks.
    @Reshmi..one of my biggest support in life,thank u..and love u always.
    @Abhinaba...Thank u.

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  45. Alpana JaiswalMarch 28, 2011 3:29 PM

    @Rashmi..Thank u.
    @Suman..Thank u..I am happy,whether I was understood or not...and will try to be so for the rest of my life.
    @Deepika...Thank u.
    @Sanjib....Thanks a lot.
    @Souvick...Thank u,finally you are appreciating my work,and yes,if I love someone,it will never be "SEX"...LOVEMAKING...as you said.

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  46. UnknownMarch 28, 2011 6:01 PM

    grt wrk ...really touching and romantic...

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  47. diptiMarch 28, 2011 6:35 PM

    really too good...mind blowing alpana
    expressed very well

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  48. AnonymousMarch 28, 2011 8:22 PM

    Hello, Ma'am! To Tag: Alpana Jaiswal, well it's very rare but then it's really magical and enchanted that you're left with no words practically to speak when the fact lies in "Silence speaks heavier than words!" Same is the condition with me right now... It's just the perfect way to depict what "LOVE" is! I can only sing these words in my heart that, "Life is a flower, of which love is the honey!" after going through this story excellently written and the way you've sketched out the meaning of the sole purpose of life's core meaning... :) Was heartening reading it, and it's a real pride to go through such a story, because it's rare that when you reach the end of a story you again wanna go to the first word of the story and read it again and again, and you happen to save the story in your laptop to read it again and again.. Thanking you! :) Keep up the good work! God bless...

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  49. SandyMarch 28, 2011 9:10 PM

    (Whistle) - what amazing imagery! Totally hot! hot! hot!
    Hugs
    Sandy

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  50. Eva ManyaMarch 29, 2011 12:04 AM

    Very, Very passionate ,Alpana. Amazing work!!! Steamy wooooo!!!! :)

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  51. KritiMarch 29, 2011 6:00 AM

    Hot stuff Alpana - a passionate topic passionately written. Very nice.

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  52. Seema SadanaMarch 29, 2011 1:46 PM

    Its a very intense romantic... After reading this anyone would want to fall in love all over again...

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  53. Jidhu JoseMarch 30, 2011 2:33 AM

    Wow....too romantic

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  54. RimlyMarch 30, 2011 2:56 PM

    Passionate, sensuous, and erotic! All the ingredients to make it a beautiful passionate poem. Beautiful Alpana.

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  55. WilliamsMarch 31, 2011 3:40 PM

    Nice Alpana.... you're really doing grea8

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  56. Alpana JaiswalApril 01, 2011 11:51 PM

    @Vishal...Thank you.
    @Dipti...Thanks a lot..missing u.
    @Aakash...I am over whelmed...thanks a lot..
    @Sandy..Your comment means a lot to me..thanks a lot.
    @Eva..Thanks a lot.

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  57. SurajApril 02, 2011 2:25 AM

    sensuous,erotic and hot....very very very steamy.I can feel the heat.

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  58. Alpana JaiswalApril 02, 2011 6:21 PM

    @Kriti...Thanks a lot.
    @Seema...I hope I didn't shock u,thanks a lot.
    @Jidhu...Thanks.
    @Rimly...I have learnt from you,because I truly believe that no can write sensual poems like you do...thank u sweetheart.
    @Williams...thank you.

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  59. Alpana JaiswalApril 02, 2011 6:23 PM

    @Suraj..Thank u,I am happy that my posts are making lives better...

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  60. wan maznahApril 20, 2011 11:34 PM

    hi alpana. you must be very good poet that you are able to write very long poems. glad to know you and thanks for adding me to "We the bloggers" all the best on your fb club..

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  61. Jessica BrantApril 20, 2011 11:35 PM

    I love, love your poem! It was beautiful missy.
    xoxo
    Jessica

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  62. Spicy SweetApril 20, 2011 11:36 PM

    That was a real mushy mushy poem. Straight through the mind of the woman. Nice

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  63. SamirApril 21, 2011 4:27 PM

    After this post ALpana - if the person concerned does not get it - I wonder what else it will take. This is beautifully convincing...

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  64. TavleenApril 21, 2011 4:29 PM

    Filled with love...passion :) Love is really the strongest feeling.. for which ppl can die a thousand times :) Great post.. always look forward to your Posts!Loved it :)

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  65. RitikaApril 23, 2011 8:04 AM

    This is not poetry...its music,magic.....

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  66. NamrataApril 23, 2011 8:07 AM

    beautiful,sensual..

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  67. RitikaApril 23, 2011 9:09 AM

    beautiful,sensual....like you.

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  68. SabrinaApril 23, 2011 9:10 AM

    Another name for you...LOVE..because the magic you create is unbelievable.

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  69. sheril benedictApril 23, 2011 10:12 AM

    wow a romantic touch !! great going ..Looking for future post

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  70. Harshal PatelApril 23, 2011 10:38 AM

    My god love with lust but you know I had never experienced this so I can't say anything more rather dreaming about.....But after reading your poem I must say that it will amazing feeling when I make love to my wife first time.....But right now can't explain.......So nice wordings just flowing without hurdles

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  71. abhinav singhApril 23, 2011 10:50 AM

    nice post alpana...nice wordings..

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  72. AnkitApril 23, 2011 12:37 PM

    beautiful.....

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  73. Anushka.April 23, 2011 12:44 PM

    This is magical. Loved every bit of it. :)

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  74. JIMApril 23, 2011 5:46 PM

    DAMN Alpana..Someone is going to be very lucky to have you love them with this much passion. Your a bloody wonder!!! I am now going to go take a cold shower :)


    http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/04/egrets-nesting-and-newborns-feeding.html

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